Bad Luck Life~(language)
~BAD LUCK LIFE~ Mental Illness on the brain,Immune to love, wealth and fame,Dark black cloud above my head,Murphy's Law and me were wed.Coincidence has found a home.Queen Karen of paranoia's...
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Karen,Great poem. There is an added thrust against fate in the overall tone of the writing, the angst and the resentment. The singsong lyrics are swallowed up in the miasma of pain the speaker is...
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Thank you Rich.I like what you've said here :)The last two lines are just a metaphor for the saying "life is a bowl of cherries"well I'm saying cucumbers.I like cucumbers but I love cherries.Nightlife...
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Speaks volumes Karen. A most effective write.Regards,Maryse
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Thank you Maryse :)Nightlife calls me.Through her I am free.It's the only way to be,all caught up in a mystery!Born with full moon fever,I can make you a believer!For I am the moonchild,truly born to...
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There is no joy in paranoia,so throw the blanket awayget rid of the aura of darkness,Enjoy the sunshine of day.I know all about paranoia. It still takes over briefly every now and then. (Been there,...
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Thank you Shelby. My paranoia comes from mental illness.It is not a normal paranoia.I get delusions with it if I don't takemy medicine and it can really get out of control.Nightlife calls me.Through...
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